Subject: Permission Request: Includes fun Interlude!
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Posted on: 2011-03-15 18:01:00 UTC
Hello again! It has been two months since I last applied for permission. In that time, I have learned the ways of the beta. I feel my writing has improved quite a bit, and it is time for me to reapply for permission.
I had three people Beta this, so if it's still not good enough spelling and grammar wise, I may need professional help.
Writing Sample: (PPC Interlude)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gCqhCgvQMs0DKnDC4JoVbHIzSt1AIuH9KWDA8-wL5uY/edit?hl=en&authkey=CIzW0sIP#
The agents who will undertake the mission are:
Agent Thomas Greenwall
Age: 18
Sex: Male
Home Continuum: World One
Department: Mary Sues
Bio: Most people first describe Agent Greenwall as “enthusiastic.” He is known for his constant pacing, loud talking, and always being excited about everything, even venturing into badfic. (“I get to help the canon, which is AWESOME!”) He has only been on the job for a month, and only recently been assigned to the department of Mary Sues. A pool is currently going as to how long he will think his job is (deep breath) AWESOME! He refers to everyone as “dude.” His side of the response center is an utter mess, a collection of weapons and flags that he has traded for.
Weapon of Choice: AK-47 (“It’s not subtle, but I’ve always wanted to use one of these!”) Also carries a wicked K-Bar, which he has never used on a mission. Both weapons happen to be native to the Stargate SG-1 continuum, which is also his favorite.
Agent Orken 7861
Age: ~24
Sex: Male
Home Continuum: Animorphs
Department: Mary Sues
Bio: Cynical and easily annoyed, Agent Seveneightsixone would be described by most as up-tight. He insists that everyone refers to him as “Agent Orken.” Very few ever do. He believes that they assigned him the partner they did in an attempt by Upstairs to tone down Greenwall’s behavior. Time will tell if it’s successful.
Orken is a Yeerk nothlit from the post war Animorph’s continuity, recruited while his native fic was on the verge of deletion. Due to his lack of Sue tendencies, while still being an original character, an Agent recruited him. (She claims it had NOTHING to do with an attempt at receiving a vacation.) He has been on the job a while now, and has gone through two partners in that time. His last one went insane after a particularly rough job. He has taken enough Bleeprin to forget the specifics.
Weapon of Choice: Dracon Beam. (“Sometimes, being able to just disintegrate a Sue can have it’s advantages.”) He picks up as many as possible whenever he is in the Animorphs continuity, and keeps them in a cabinet in his response center. In any other continuity, he will use whatever weapon he deems the most efficient.
The mission will be run in the Stargate SG-1 Badfic known as "Stargate: Discovery" . It’s on the list of unclaimed badfic for a reason.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5820378/1/Stargate_Discovery