That was really the only part of the plot that bugged me, and it was just because, well, headtiltingly weird crack pairing. But everybody's pretty much in-character, and it isn't even boring, so I'll just go move it off the claimed badfic list.

To be fair I would say there is only one real question. Does the fi make you long to put your head in a blender? If it does PPC the lemon juice out of it.

By that I mean: it actually sounds like an interesting plot. Like falling in love with a ghost.

If you're only gripe is that you wouldn't have come up with a story like that, it's probably not badfic.