Subject: Oh dear.
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Posted on: 2011-01-07 13:41:00 UTC
While the story is definitely on the "wut" side of things, commenting with "You're insane, aren't you" is not a good way to go about doing things.
That said, it appears that this story is part of a series. If you're not planning on taking it on, I think I'll start on the series once I manage to get myself Permission.
Agent Runedragon reporting!
I haven't been around due to missions (or lack thereof, not sure the whole process and just too shy to ask about it) and I have a doozy of a Sue. Approach with caution, this Sue is dangerous. She had trained several Autobots through breastfeeding to carry out her orders. I repeat, approach with caution!
http://luanatf.deviantart.com/art/Family-Bonded-Again-80776115
While the story is definitely on the "wut" side of things, commenting with "You're insane, aren't you" is not a good way to go about doing things.
That said, it appears that this story is part of a series. If you're not planning on taking it on, I think I'll start on the series once I manage to get myself Permission.
I don't know the canon well enough to tackle it and don't have the time right now for a whole new mission, just felt I had to comment because it's a really weird coincidence, heh.
I can't read the fic (I do not have a Deviant account), but it looks like something horrible.
*jump on a fighter jet and prepares to take off*
Er, I took the "scramble" in military sense. I'm STILL playing too much Ace Combat 5. But I love it. And I'm really sure the the PPC could use a fighter squadron. I mean, we've got Sun Crushers, TARDISes and portals, a couple fighters are nothing. And AC ones shoud be easy to pilot enough to keep Agent casualties low.
I myself have a dA account, though it's gone months without so much as a new journal. I'd comment, but since this Suethor is apparently another product of the "remotely derogatory remark = tantrum-inducing personal attack" school of thought, I'd be asking for trouble. Not worth getting reported for someone so petty.
Makes no difference one way or the other; I've already claimed a fic as my first target, so I'll leave this one at the mercy (or lack thereof) of the rest of the Agency.
I'll stick to the ground. I'm more comfortable having an assault rifle or shotgun in hand than a joystick, though, the idea of cruising at G-Force in the air is thrilling and gives me an adrenaline rush, I'm better at pointing at shooting. First-Person shooters are my forte.
I am quite good at driving games, and I managed to complete some missions of AC5 at Ace difficulty. However, I am quite weak in First Person Shooters, the only difficulty in which I am able to complete any gamme is Easy.
There's one I want your opinions about.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5461594/1/TheAvengingAngel
Hermione Granger takes to the air in her F/A-27 Ravenclaw as the skies become the battleground for those seeking revenge.
Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,515 - Reviews: 11
What is it? A potential good crossover or a complete mess? I cannot say for sure. Maybe because English is not my first language. However, there are some errors only about Hermone's (thats it, Hermione is apparently an ace pilot) plane:
1) There is no such thing as a F/A-27 (the XFA-27 never became a production fighter in AC canon)
2) Wrong missiles: the XFA-27 has AIM-9M Sidewinders, but the fic states the F/A-27 uses MM-7s, whatever they are, and starts with a loadout of 26 missiles and 2 QAAMs, that doesn't make sense both in Ace Combat canon (worst loadout I know of are 52 missiles and 6 QAAMs on a rather scrappy plane) and in reality.
3) Wrong engines: the XFA-27 has two engines with unknown technology, the fic states that the F/A-27 has four pulse detonation ones. Believable about the pulse detonation engines, but where the hell are supposed to be the two extra ones? This guy is confusing the XFA-27 with the YR-302 Fregata, the special ability of the XFA-27 is to fire up to four missiles at once instead of two.
Since the fic relies a lot on equipment description, giving out each one wrong is not good.
...Right, what she said.