Subject: Oh, I forgot.
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Posted on: 2011-01-06 20:15:00 UTC
There's one I want your opinions about.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5461594/1/TheAvengingAngel
Hermione Granger takes to the air in her F/A-27 Ravenclaw as the skies become the battleground for those seeking revenge.
Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,515 - Reviews: 11
What is it? A potential good crossover or a complete mess? I cannot say for sure. Maybe because English is not my first language. However, there are some errors only about Hermone's (thats it, Hermione is apparently an ace pilot) plane:
1) There is no such thing as a F/A-27 (the XFA-27 never became a production fighter in AC canon)
2) Wrong missiles: the XFA-27 has AIM-9M Sidewinders, but the fic states the F/A-27 uses MM-7s, whatever they are, and starts with a loadout of 26 missiles and 2 QAAMs, that doesn't make sense both in Ace Combat canon (worst loadout I know of are 52 missiles and 6 QAAMs on a rather scrappy plane) and in reality.
3) Wrong engines: the XFA-27 has two engines with unknown technology, the fic states that the F/A-27 has four pulse detonation ones. Believable about the pulse detonation engines, but where the hell are supposed to be the two extra ones? This guy is confusing the XFA-27 with the YR-302 Fregata, the special ability of the XFA-27 is to fire up to four missiles at once instead of two.
Since the fic relies a lot on equipment description, giving out each one wrong is not good.