Subject: Permission granted!
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Posted on: 2010-12-28 02:51:00 UTC

I know nothing about Deltora Quest, but I take it the story is meant to be something along the lines of Darths & Droids? Sounds like fun. Your writing is entertaining, though you could use a refresher on how to punctuate around dialogue. I'd be glad to explain things, if you like, or you can look it up. There are all kinds of helpful guides around the internet.

I'll be interested in reading a three-agent team. It's rare, and the interplay between three people works differently than with just two.

Mark Sienna is similar to a character of mine--same basic power of being able to cure someone else at the expense of himself, though my character is able to heal faster than normal, since he has little to no control over it and would ended up dead many times over if he couldn't recover after picking up random injuries and diseases every time he went out. ^_^; It's a fun thing, and I'll look forward to seeing what you do with Mark.

Go forth and PPC!

~Neshomeh

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