Subject: Okay! :D (nm)
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Posted on: 2011-01-01 18:00:00 UTC
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Permission Request by
on 2010-12-27 10:04:00 UTC
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Hello all. It's been a little over a month since I first started posting on the Board and talking on the IRC. I’ve decided to make my first attempt at gaining permission. Your thoughts on my story would also be appreciated as well, as I intend to continue writing it as well.
Writing Sample:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6589907/1/DeltoraQuestADungeonsandDragonsAdventure
Character summary
Agent Name:Maria
Real Name: Maria
Home continuum: Metal Gear Solid
Age: 20ish
Agent Career: 6 years
Notable points: During 2008 Mary sue invasion she was bitten by a Vampire!Sue, has since refused to use any of the powers gained from such a change. Being of the Discworld variety, she has sublimated her addiction to physical contact, and it is not uncommon for her to greet with enthusiastic hugs, and to give many playful punches. This has led to some to think she is, in fact, Luxury in disguise.
On an unspecified mission into the Redwall continuum, she succumbed to bloodwrath during a slash moment, and attempted to kill Matthias and Cluny. She would later admit to having read The Cluny Fic shortly before hand, on a dare. She has since been barred from any missions there, and refuses to have bloodwrath treated.
General information:
A Cat/human hybrid recruited from a badfic, she has served in the PPC for 6 years. She has had several previous partners; most don’t usually stay with her for long, mostly due to her infrequent violent outbursts. Despite this, she is a cheerful person, and has a fondness for collecting many things (read; not on fire or nailed down) and has filled her RC with much plunder. She wears a cat suit to deal with her vulnerability to sunlight; the irony is not lost on her. She can pronounce an “!” if surprised.
Agent Name: Sienna
Real Name: Mark Sienna
Home continuum: Cthulhuverse
Age: 19
He was created on and RP thread, one in which an in-game argument led to several members godmoding to kill the others, and he fell through a resulting plothole. The only visible part of him is above the nose, the rest is always covered. He wears a red scarf which is always swaying, not even he knows why. He has advanced regenerative powers, though it is hindered by certain types of magic, as well as magical weapons.
He is also able to heal others, though doing so leaves him with an exact duplicate of the wound, which heals extremely slow and will leave a permanent reminder, usually a scar. This has led to him wearing clothes that cover most of him. He is a nice enough person, despite his ominous and broody look. He enjoys videos games and has an over abundance of sarcasm. He likes to use the two adamantium knives he has no actual explanation for having.
Agent name: Cadmar
Real Name: Cadmar
Home continuum: World one
Age 19
He fell into HQ through a plot hole right into Luxuries RC, where after a few awkward explanations, many seduction attempts, and an impromptu make-out session, he was led to the Marquis de Sod’s office for recruitment. He dislikes the entirety of the management, believing that control corrupts, and corrupted flowers are a scary idea. He is an avid gamer, and listens to music as much as he can. He has a good sense of humor, though it can be dark and sadistic at times, and is usually in a pleasant mood.
Out right hates being interrupted, and takes major offence to it. He has read many badfic, several of which were Legendary, leaving him with a spotty memory, and he relishes the chance to help the canon. He wears mostly black, camo-pants with many pockets, and always has a backpack with him which he uses to carry a variety of things. He uses two machetes as his main weapons, and prefers most WWII and Vietnam era weapons, which he has expressed a desire to collect. He is slightly overweight, due to a caffeine addiction.
They are all to be placed in the Department of Floaters.
The fic I intend to first take down is 'A Small Crime' (ironicly hilarious) a Suefic in the Shrek fandom. Plus, the author has a quote about Tieflings in the beginning of a chapter, for that, the punishment will be worse.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5097340/1/ -
Permission granted! by
on 2010-12-28 02:51:00 UTC
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I know nothing about Deltora Quest, but I take it the story is meant to be something along the lines of Darths & Droids? Sounds like fun. Your writing is entertaining, though you could use a refresher on how to punctuate around dialogue. I'd be glad to explain things, if you like, or you can look it up. There are all kinds of helpful guides around the internet.
I'll be interested in reading a three-agent team. It's rare, and the interplay between three people works differently than with just two.
Mark Sienna is similar to a character of mine--same basic power of being able to cure someone else at the expense of himself, though my character is able to heal faster than normal, since he has little to no control over it and would ended up dead many times over if he couldn't recover after picking up random injuries and diseases every time he went out. ^_^; It's a fun thing, and I'll look forward to seeing what you do with Mark.
Go forth and PPC!
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*cheer* by
on 2010-12-31 15:57:00 UTC
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I have some very (veryveryveryvery) old experience with DeltoraQuest... I could probably reread over the summer if you need a grammar-beta.
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Maybe by
on 2010-12-31 20:16:00 UTC
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It seems most people these days have no idea what Deltora Quest is, though from the Pit Fandom, it is understandable. I'll keep you in mind when I go to post the next chapter of it, thanks for volunteering to help!
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Okay! :D (nm) by
on 2011-01-01 18:00:00 UTC
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*Flying Glomp* by
on 2010-12-28 19:39:00 UTC
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Thankyouthankyouthankyou! You would be correct, the general premise will be like Darths and Droids, though I might add in some RL scenes. I'm going to be using one of the themes from Dm of the Rings as well, that is, the story setting is a ripe place for adventures, but the story itself would be a very silly game.
Yeah, the main thing I've been told was the dialogue punctuation, everything else was edited by my friend. I'll have to search around for some guides on it, it is simple enough to fix.
I actually went looking for your page on the wiki, interested in the agent you mentioned, and like the hoser I am, the idea of looking on the Permission Giver Page never occurred to me. Would it be okay if I emailed my PPC work to you for editing? I’ll of course do most myself, but someone with more experience could give more insight. Thanks again! -
Sure. {= ) by
on 2010-12-29 00:45:00 UTC
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You're welcome. Send away, when you're ready. Just be aware that I'm not the fastest beta on the planet.
The character I mentioned isn't an agent--I used to RP with him sometimes, in Generic Superpowers settings. I have his bio here if you're still interested, though.
I never actually got into DM of the Rings. I should probably try again sometime. Darths & Droids is pretty awesome, though.
~Neshomeh