So... pretty much what it says - I need a beta reader for my first mission. It's for a Lord of the Rings Action/Adventure fic. The original fic is very violent and graphic, but the mission isn't. I'd love it if someone could check it over and let me know whether or not it's funny and whether the plot makes any sense at all before I post it up for everyone to see. Also maybe a skim for SPAG, though I have checked it.

Thanks very much in advance!

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