Subject: Re: Double Plug
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Posted on: 2013-05-07 23:06:00 UTC

Well, you already know my opinion on OFUDisc, although it's probably worth repeating - I'm really enjoying the story, and looking forward to reading the rest of it and finding out where some of those plotlines are going.

As for the Trousers of Time, I thought it was a pretty cool piece, and I especially liked how excited the unnamed Floaters agent was at the thought that there would be news from the future of how great they were, only to be cut off by the Sunflower Official like that. I really like your portrayal of the SO here - he seems to have a touch of menace to him, as if he'd be willing to go to any lengths to stop the Department of Efficiency from coming about.

However, that timeline chart you produced is far too simple for my tastes :P

I'm tempted to write something up involving my agents getting caught up in a pre-Trousers Sundering - after all, it's a pretty common theme in stuff involving time travel/prophecies for the very actions taken to avoid some event actually setting them up.

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