I think this may be your best mission yet, Miah! I especially enjoyed reading the canons after they were rescued from the Suefluence: when Lestrade and Mrs. Hudson were together; and later when they were planning to escape with Holmes, and Lestrade's behavior gave them away. I thought the characterizations in those scenes were spot-on.

I also liked that Unger is beginning to be more assertive and confident in this mission, telling jokes and acting a bit more like Kelok's partner, rather than sidekick. It's a shame they didn't get to fight any zombies on this mission, but I guess it's long enough as it is. They were boring zombies anyway. (And speaking of zombies, I can't believe Holmes discovers Watson might have been exposed to the zombie virus, and then proceeds to make out with him! If a scratch can spread the virus, surely a kiss like that would, too!)

One section that confused me was when the Agents were rescuing Lestrade and Mrs. Hudson. I had trouble understanding where the portals were leading, and who was on which side of them. But like I said, an awesome mission overall, and you're amazing for being able to sit through that monster!

But seriously, how can someone make ZOMBIES that boring?

*was curious, took a peek at the original fic* *shudders*

Well done in slogging through that one. I sort of love the idea of nesting flashbacks hatching baby flashbacks.

I know I was there when you were talking about this one in the chat, Miah, but I'm just starting to grasp the full impact of the horror of this badfic. And I'm not talking about the zombies.

*shudder*

Poor Mary Watson...

They were lucky that the badfic's zombies were boring and played second-fiddle to "tru wuv", otherwise they would've been killing zombies left and right.

Sherlock Holmes meets John Romero? That's just... weird.

Anyhow, nice mission. Kelok and Unger do not have it easy. And Unger... hee hee... doesn't even know where babies come from! :D

And I do love the concept of baby flashbacks.