You know, for all of its bad points, it's not the worst story I've ever read...There was the one with Harry (who inexplicably had catboy features), Lord Voldemort, and a horribly abused plate of pasta (before you ask--DON'T!); and then there was the other story with Harry Potter and Lucius Malfoy in a consensual BD/SM relationship (Malfoy top...distrubing, hey?)
I've only ever heard my one friend (the one my age, Brooke) talk about the KH characters, so...the only help I can give is by point out all the bad things that this author is doing in relationship to sex.

Found a handy little thing that's going to pop up in my next mission--it's by a guy named Minotaur, and it's a guide (written specifically for fanfic authors) about everything related to gay sex . Just from the description, I think the author of the badfic needs this like Bella needs a brain.

-Honu_Wahine