That is some kind of nasty fic. Good work killing it.

Did you mean to have Immac give them the meds instead of Suzine? The switch seemed a bit sudden; I didn't even catch it until you mentioned Immac later and I went back and checked.

I'm not sure they'd be thrilled with the idea of people being sent on a mission straight from the ward, but they're pretty low on the totem pole when it comes to deciding what goes on in HQ. Alas, oh woe, cruel world, etc. ... Maybe they just haven't been given an RC yet?

Either way, I'm not objecting. I can easily see something like that happening over the objections of the nurses, and it worked out in the end.

~Neshomeh

Phew! Bet you're glad that mission's over with! Here's to having good old asexual Holmes back.

I noticed a couple of minor errors in the turtle mission:

In the paragraph where Kelok breaks the Sue's arm, he "was finding it hard to breath." Breath should be breathe.

When Unger is telling Kelok how the nurses fixed up Moriarty, he says, "They're magic is strong!" They're should be their.