Subject: Re: And with links that work
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Posted on: 2010-06-29 16:50:00 UTC

Phew! Bet you're glad that mission's over with! Here's to having good old asexual Holmes back.

I noticed a couple of minor errors in the turtle mission:

In the paragraph where Kelok breaks the Sue's arm, he "was finding it hard to breath." Breath should be breathe.

When Unger is telling Kelok how the nurses fixed up Moriarty, he says, "They're magic is strong!" They're should be their.

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