Subject: Be nice to the newbie!
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Posted on: 2010-06-24 23:36:00 UTC

*shakes finger* One reminder = enough, really!

Right. Eragon. Well, basically, it's simply not very well-written. The plot is predictable, the characters are flat, and the writing itself tends toward the urple. Eragon himself is a pretty standard Marty-Stu (and a self-insert on top of it), without the redeeming elements that make many Canon Sues less annoying than they could be. Many of us could, and have, written better stories; and all of us have read a great many better stories.

It's a bit like the way a professional chef might react if someone walked into his restaurant and asked him to make them a hamburger "just like the ones they serve at McDonald's."

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