Re: mission plug

mission plug by IndeMaat on 2010-05-30 19:11:00 UTC Reply

Bad case of work avoiding behaviour resulted in writing a mission. Relatively short, only 2500 words. The mission: Time of Angels That fic that was discussed here a few days ago. Spoilers for Who episodes The Time of Angels / Flesh and Stone.

Spotted while on this mission: a mini-reaper by the name of Father Octavain.

Well done! by Candescence on 2010-06-02 02:52:00 UTC Reply

Aforementioned minor mistakes aside, a good and entertaining mission! Seriously, what is it with sues and dreamcatchers anyway? It's silly.

Thanks by IndeMaat on 2010-06-02 14:54:00 UTC Reply

But still mistakes? I had hoped I had caught them all by now.

I have no idea what the deal is with Sues and dreamcatchers; this is the first time I saw a Sue pull one out of her pocket. Which I charged her for, seeing as she was wearing skinny jeans and one can't hold a tictac in the pocket of those without it showing.

Thank You by Dreaming of Colors on 2010-05-31 05:41:00 UTC Reply

Thank you for PPC-ing this fic! I was so disgusted upon seeing the info that I didn't go any further.
What is it about Sues and dreamcatchers? by Calista on 2010-05-30 23:12:00 UTC Reply

Really, now...

Well done.
Re: mission plug by Pretzel on 2010-05-30 20:21:00 UTC Reply

Very nice, though I did notice a few errors in it here and there. You might want to look it over once more...

Could you be a little more specific? (nm) by IndeMaat on 2010-05-30 21:03:00 UTC Reply

Re: Could you be a little more specific? by Pretzel on 2010-05-30 21:07:00 UTC Reply

Well, there're a few misspellings, but mostly it's the homophones that I suspect the spellchecker didn't catch. For example: "She [the Sue] explained that it took her weeks to find the week[ spot of an Angel in order for her to phase into it."

Thanks. by IndeMaat on 2010-05-30 21:27:00 UTC Reply

Sorry, if I snapped a little. I always find it annoying if people tell me I have made errors and then don't continue to tell me what they were.

Thanks for reading. I hope the killing of the Sue was to your satisfaction.

Re: Thanks. by Pretzel on 2010-05-30 21:31:00 UTC Reply

Don't worry about it. The mission was awesome. ^^