Subject: Re: Could you be a little more specific?
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Posted on: 2010-05-30 21:07:00 UTC
Well, there're a few misspellings, but mostly it's the homophones that I suspect the spellchecker didn't catch. For example: "She [the Sue] explained that it took her weeks to find the week[ spot of an Angel in order for her to phase into it."
Bad case of work avoiding behaviour resulted in writing a mission. Relatively short, only 2500 words. The mission: Time of Angels That fic that was discussed here a few days ago. Spoilers for Who episodes The Time of Angels / Flesh and Stone.
Spotted while on this mission: a mini-reaper by the name of Father Octavain.
Aforementioned minor mistakes aside, a good and entertaining mission! Seriously, what is it with sues and dreamcatchers anyway? It's silly.
But still mistakes? I had hoped I had caught them all by now.
I have no idea what the deal is with Sues and dreamcatchers; this is the first time I saw a Sue pull one out of her pocket. Which I charged her for, seeing as she was wearing skinny jeans and one can't hold a tictac in the pocket of those without it showing.
Thank you for PPC-ing this fic! I was so disgusted upon seeing the info that I didn't go any further.
Really, now...
Well done.
Very nice, though I did notice a few errors in it here and there. You might want to look it over once more...
Well, there're a few misspellings, but mostly it's the homophones that I suspect the spellchecker didn't catch. For example: "She [the Sue] explained that it took her weeks to find the week[ spot of an Angel in order for her to phase into it."
Sorry, if I snapped a little. I always find it annoying if people tell me I have made errors and then don't continue to tell me what they were.
Thanks for reading. I hope the killing of the Sue was to your satisfaction.
Don't worry about it. The mission was awesome. ^^