Hoo boy. This story, you guys... It makes me yearn for RL brain bleach.

From what I saw from a cursory read-through, this story is very bad. It's a Saix/Demyx Mpreg story with some Axel/Roxas on the side. Everyone is horribly OOC (including a caring and sympathetic Xemnas), time is put through the wringer (ten years in two chapters!), the prose tends toward the purple end of the spectrum and there are superfluous ellipses everywhere.

The kicker for me, though, was the final chapter. There is a touching scene where Axel gets a little "close" with Saix and Demyx's son (who is ten years old at this point). We're talking very bad touch.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5057354/1/BrokenTheMelodious_Diviner