Subject: Permission granted!
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Posted on: 2010-04-24 19:08:00 UTC
Your agents look like a ton of fun (I am thoroughly entertained by the idea of an ex-god), and they're well written.
One suggestion, though - a beta would not go amiss. there were multiple places where I think your wording was rather awkward, and a good beta would help.
So, I've been doing MSTs and decided to go for Permission.
These are my agents:
Caroline Asleif: http://terrofen.livejournal.com/3221.html
LJ Silverblade: http://terrofen.livejournal.com/3412.html
Here's a sample mission, so you guys can get my writing style:
http://terrofen.livejournal.com/2916.html
So, fingers crossed!
Your agents look like a ton of fun (I am thoroughly entertained by the idea of an ex-god), and they're well written.
One suggestion, though - a beta would not go amiss. there were multiple places where I think your wording was rather awkward, and a good beta would help.
Thank you so much! School is ending soon, so I can really get on the mission horse!
Will do on the beta thing.
A link to the original fic. Wish I could edit.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2595136/1/DoYouBelieve