Oh, almost forgot...

Subject: Oh, almost forgot...
Author: terrofen
Posted on: 2010-04-18 22:06:00 UTC

Permission Request by terrofen on 2010-04-18 22:04:00 UTC Reply

So, I've been doing MSTs and decided to go for Permission.

These are my agents:

Caroline Asleif: http://terrofen.livejournal.com/3221.html

LJ Silverblade: http://terrofen.livejournal.com/3412.html

Here's a sample mission, so you guys can get my writing style:

http://terrofen.livejournal.com/2916.html

So, fingers crossed!

Permission granted! by Techno-Dann on 2010-04-24 19:08:00 UTC Reply

Your agents look like a ton of fun (I am thoroughly entertained by the idea of an ex-god), and they're well written.

One suggestion, though - a beta would not go amiss. there were multiple places where I think your wording was rather awkward, and a good beta would help.

Thanks! by terrofen on 2010-04-24 21:14:00 UTC Reply

Thank you so much! School is ending soon, so I can really get on the mission horse!

Will do on the beta thing.

Oh, almost forgot... by terrofen on 2010-04-18 22:06:00 UTC Reply

A link to the original fic. Wish I could edit.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2595136/1/DoYouBelieve