In regards to the Sues' assorted powers: What.

I read KHR and found it hysterically funny through the Daily Life arc. I started to get bored when the genre shift occurred and the story got serious, then gave up some way into the tournament arc.

Fun mission, though. Having things not go quite according to plan always makes for interesting reading.

I don't know the canon, but using a canon villain (I think?) to help take out a dangerous Sue, but then making them a greater threat, set this mission apart from most others, and made it a lot of fun to read.

'Cause, you know, if you don't tell me what you want, I can't do anything for you. {= )

(That goes for all of you!)

~Neshomeh

Thanks for the rec.

KHR! was, and still is, on my list of anime series' to check out. It lost repeatedly, to Code Geass, Gundam 00, Macross Frontier and now Kyou Kara Maou. One of these days I shall get around to watching it.

Ooh, nice mission. And I like the Code Geass reference.

I've never heard of Katekyo Hitman Reborn!, but you explained in there why things were out of character, so I think I followed it pretty well. Man, that was an uber powerful Sue. Between the two of them, I don't think they missed many super powers.

You know, the "I'm 14 and fail my english classes." (English being uncapped there because the Suethor left it uncapped.) Is probably one of the lamest excuses possible. She's admitting that she knows the story is total garbage, but she's going to post it anyway? Honestly, it takes some special kind of stupid (and arrogance) to do that.

I liked how you took them down, even if it was tense for a bit there at the end. Oh! Also, that mini chameleon sounds awesome!