What is that? Could it be Sporking time?

Subject: What is that? Could it be Sporking time?
Author: terrofen
Posted on: 2010-03-17 06:33:00 UTC

Okay, one more chapter down. One to go. Tried to thin the literary chaff a bit, cutting some of the more meaningless junk. (I know. Meaningless junk in Buffy/Harry Potter/Tomb Raider fan fic!? Say it ain't so!)

http://terrofen.livejournal.com/950.html

As always, crits are appreciated. Also, is anybody interested in learning the backstories of my sporkers? I was thinking about posting origins for Caroline and LJ.

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What is that? Could it be Sporking time? by terrofen on 2010-03-17 06:33:00 UTC

Cool! by Nyxix on 2010-03-18 22:29:00 UTC Reply

I liked it. Though the colours are a bit off-putting and don't really fit with the background.

Honestly. The fic is giving me the creepy crawlies. What you chose to copy and paste over is completely and utterly... I can see why you wanted to kill it. :D

Script format is interesting. You're going with humour, so I'm rather enjoying it. Keep it up! I want to see how you squash it!