Subject: Cool!
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Posted on: 2010-03-18 22:29:00 UTC
I liked it. Though the colours are a bit off-putting and don't really fit with the background.
Honestly. The fic is giving me the creepy crawlies. What you chose to copy and paste over is completely and utterly... I can see why you wanted to kill it. :D
Script format is interesting. You're going with humour, so I'm rather enjoying it. Keep it up! I want to see how you squash it!
Okay, one more chapter down. One to go. Tried to thin the literary chaff a bit, cutting some of the more meaningless junk. (I know. Meaningless junk in Buffy/Harry Potter/Tomb Raider fan fic!? Say it ain't so!)
http://terrofen.livejournal.com/950.html
As always, crits are appreciated. Also, is anybody interested in learning the backstories of my sporkers? I was thinking about posting origins for Caroline and LJ.
I liked it. Though the colours are a bit off-putting and don't really fit with the background.
Honestly. The fic is giving me the creepy crawlies. What you chose to copy and paste over is completely and utterly... I can see why you wanted to kill it. :D
Script format is interesting. You're going with humour, so I'm rather enjoying it. Keep it up! I want to see how you squash it!