Thank you, for permission.

I know I have punctuation and grammar issues. I keep trying, and it keeps slipping through my fingers.

I have one that I am aiming at with Bryn in Pokemon, but I'm going to pick an NCIS to work on, too.

I probably should have either put in a lead in summary to those stories or picked something that isn't from the middle of a longer story. In fact, I'm going to go label those better right now.

Maybe Cali can overcome being scared of enclosed spaces so he can actually get some use out of his night vision. I was afraid to give him stuff that really worked. I didn't want him to be over the top with stuff. I do have a plan for him to try using his whip at some point, and catch Agent Miah instead of the Sue.

I think his powers do work, but are totally useless. Although, everyone is going to believe that they are completely in his head. He may even be convinced later that they are in his head, only to have one suddenly be a bit useful. :D I think he'll be a lot of fun to have around.

Thank you for the permission.

Fortunately we haven't disagreed yet :P