Great stuff by
Rilwen Shadowflame
on 2009-09-07 09:28:00 UTC
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I didn't see this until now. It's great. I really like Derik. And the kender's kinda funny too.
Re: PLUG! by
(name here)
on 2009-09-04 02:38:00 UTC
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I rather like this one, though it does remind me of a point that I don't recall ever being adressed. Doesn't voyager have the macrovirus cure as of the end of the first and possibly only cannonical appearance of the macrovirus? If so, why did it take so long to create and deploy it?
Nice! by
Caestus
on 2009-09-02 05:27:00 UTC
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I liked the longer format. I also like FicPsych's interactions with all the canons.
A great read by
Spud avec
on 2009-09-01 18:33:00 UTC
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Of course, I had a teensy sneak-peek, hahaha. I found the second part as a whole particularly interesting, especially the process of Derik going through the reality room. I really like how it rationalised his scars and such.
Anyway, I'm glad I have a character squirrelled away in FicPsych. I think, like I said when I had a look, that you did him perfect justice and took good care of him. No *permament* damage was done anyway ;).
BUT YEAH. It was a really interesting take on things, and it was nice to see kind of alternative war stories to the 'main' events of each crisis. Shows that even though the invasion and epidemic have been and gone, there's still room for more writing to be done about them.
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Great job!
Re: PLUG! by
Sedri
on 2009-09-01 01:30:00 UTC
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Lovely, all of it! A great morning read. I like... well, all of it, especially the overall cohesion, as well as some littler things, my absurdness insists that I randomly mention a few: Luke going out to play hero, for instance - very typical. Now I'm getting mental images of Legolas going with him, armed with bow and arrow and totally unable to communicate with his partner...
Exclaimation-Mark TARDIS! How fitting :D
Also, I really like how you've written the inclusion of the Duty Song, as well as the Reality Room, and how it affected E'rik/Derik. I wonder if I should shove Iza in there... ;)
Anyway, thanks, Nesh. I really enjoyed it - the whole thing. All of it. Good work! :)
"Worlds are lost or worlds are saved..." by
Huinesoron
on 2009-08-31 23:51:00 UTC
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I like it. I particularly like Derek (pretty much his whole section in Part Two) and the view we get on how the fight against the Macrovirus Infestation actually went. I think that was the first fight in HQ I've read that actually seemed desparate.
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Good work by
Tawaki
on 2009-08-31 22:24:00 UTC
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However, the LMSF were responsible for the bugs, not the EPC.
Wow. by
Techno-Dann
on 2009-08-31 21:59:00 UTC
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Very well done. I'm impressed.