One of the anon reviewers' is apparently named 'Laura'. Did anyone else notice? Unsettling coincidence...

I'd volunteer, but it seems Trojie and Pads have this one. I wish you two luck. *grimaces* You'll need it.

The author of this atrocity is in the habit of sticking author's notes at the end of each chapter. In one, they've spelt their own name wrong. What sort of mini would that make?

See my two pence on the reviews page for chapter two.

Oh, and she's dropping anvils about abortion. The whole thing is apparently vehicle for her pro-life views.

That sounds almost as bad as "Subjugation." *cringe* *shudder*

~Neshomeh

Given this sounds like a hideous mischaracterisation of the alter ego of one of our agents, I rather suspect Trojie and I may have to tackle that one.

*facepalm, headdesk, headstairs, headescalator, headchainsaw...*