http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4907397/1/TheSealof_Solomon

The OC's look like they're genderbent copies of Natahniel and Bartimaeus, but they haven't annoyed me yet (though I may just be too lenient). As for spelling errors, there are a few, but the only one that overly annoys me is a constant misspelling of 'commoner' as 'commonor'. Oh, and a character who may have died in the last book (Jane Farrar) survived, but may be in character (she's still a pretty b****h). I'm still at chapter 4, and all in all, this doesn't seem to be pretty bad (in fact, I'm starting to like it). Your opinions?