Subject: Sorry, I forgot about that step.
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Posted on: 2009-07-02 14:47:00 UTC
I'm also sorry for yelling at you like that, as well as the delay in answering (internet problems). Just one question: why did you not say who you are? I tought you were someone else!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4907397/1/TheSealof_Solomon
The OC's look like they're genderbent copies of Natahniel and Bartimaeus, but they haven't annoyed me yet (though I may just be too lenient). As for spelling errors, there are a few, but the only one that overly annoys me is a constant misspelling of 'commoner' as 'commonor'. Oh, and a character who may have died in the last book (Jane Farrar) survived, but may be in character (she's still a pretty b****h). I'm still at chapter 4, and all in all, this doesn't seem to be pretty bad (in fact, I'm starting to like it). Your opinions?
Read the title again, would you?
Also, sorry about that last post. I was just pissed off (I was lurking in the Giant in the Playground Forums yeaterday, and saw a flamewar about a certain Order of the Stick Character*).
*I don't even play D&D!
But honestly, when I say 'possible', I do not mean it as an euphemism for 'certainly'!
... finish reading it before you post it?
hS
I'm also sorry for yelling at you like that, as well as the delay in answering (internet problems). Just one question: why did you not say who you are? I tought you were someone else!
It was me, just logged out. Though you probably wouldn't have apologised for being rude if I'd said it earlier, so maybe it's for the best you ended up thinking it was hS. :P
Part of the reason for being rude was because I tought it was you. You did make that anonymous edit at Tv.Tropes (I still count myself as a newbie, and one who has done a few Board-unworthy things) and I just snapped. Sorry.
Can I have Natahniel? Whatever he is? (Don't know what Bartimaeus Trilogy-minis are.)