Subject: Your skills are improving, young Padawan.
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Posted on: 2009-02-22 14:57:00 UTC
Don't get too excited, I found enough hiccups to keep me going. :P Still, you do seem to be retaining a few of my mini-lectures.
In conclusion: Cassie is pleased.
I just finished the latest chapter of a fanfic I'm in the middle of. It's called Voyage of the Cat's Eye and it's a Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles AU (with a bunch of other CLAMP crossovers). It's set in a pirate 'verse and it's romantic/comedy/adventure.
Basically, my problem is this. Cassie normally betas for me, and quite energetically. She's already done most of the chapter, but I went back and edited quite a lot so I need her back. However, at the moment I'm unable to get in touch with her so I need a new beta! It's basically just spelling and grammar issues, along with any thoughts on pacing and the like. I know not many of you know the fandom in question, but that's okay because it's an AU and I'm pretty comfortable with my characterisation. I just need someone to spell and grammar check for me.
Any volunteers?
Honestly, you could have waited. I'm here now, and believe me, I'm going to be thoroughly betaing that chapter even if you've published it. I'll be here tomorrow morning, so expect to get a talking to, young lady!
*hug* At least you've got on with it. Well done for that.
But if you're back I'll wait for you to beta too. I wanted your opinion on something anyway. :p Buta seems to think my spelling and grammar is fine this time.
Sure, I've got time to kill.
I only found two typos. Excellent. And while I personally don't ship KuroFai, I might want to see where this AU goes.
Oh, and since you just happened to be the first person I talked to after beating Prinny: Can I Really Be The Hero?, you get a life-size Hero Prinny plush, complete with plush Prinny swords in the pouch.
Hm... Either I'm improving, in which case Cassie will be pleased, or I've done some crazy Jedi mind trick so that you'll miss them all. The results should be amusing either way, thank you. :p
*cuddles plush*
Don't get too excited, I found enough hiccups to keep me going. :P Still, you do seem to be retaining a few of my mini-lectures.
In conclusion: Cassie is pleased.