I can has Permission, lawl?

I can has Permission, lawl? by Zotz on 2009-01-28 22:10:00 UTC

I have edited it... by Zotz on 2009-01-29 22:01:00 UTC Reply

See what you think now.
Needs work, I think. by Neshomeh on 2009-01-29 02:54:00 UTC Reply

I don't know about the other PGs, but I'd prefer to see a lot less horrific rapefic-quoting and a lot more funny agent snark, of which there wasn't much. Also, the last time I checked, the consoles didn't force the agents through the portal. It just doesn't work that way.

And, "lawl"? On a permission request? Seriously?

~Neshomeh

Think I got a bit premature, by Zotz on 2009-01-29 12:12:00 UTC Reply

I can still edit it, so I probably will. My sense of humor has seemed to atrophy in recent months, which is probably the School's fault. I was also unsure about the consoles, and I needed a slapstick gag...

About the "lawl", It was just a joke. I am not affiliated with ICHCb in any way.

It's mostly back though, by Zotz on 2009-01-29 20:08:00 UTC Reply

So I have been at work on rectifying the problems. Luckily DevArt has an "edit" tool. I probably shouldn't have posted the rough draft, it's just that others *coughSISTERcough* were pushing me to submit last night...

Thanks for the feedback, and I will get right to work!

Hmpf. Wasn't forcing him. by Maudlin Hart on 2009-02-03 20:12:00 UTC Reply

Zotz is much bigger than me. I would need siege weaponry and trolls to force him to do anything. He *did* keep asking me "Do you think I should post it yet? What about now? Now?".
But I helped him with the HTML code!

Rapefic quoting? by Zotz on 2009-01-29 12:13:00 UTC Reply

I wasn't aware I was doing that... Ye gods.

I think... by Spud avec on 2009-01-29 17:19:00 UTC Reply

..that the point Neshomeh was getting at is that you've put great chinks of the fic itself in the mission. When it's as NSFW as that (although I'm not suggesting this is gospel, I am after all but a newbie) I don't think it's really necessary to have all the explicit detail there. You can sort of skirt the issue by having either reactions or just by removing the excerpt and describing events less explicitly.

It also isn't necessary to have that much of the badfic itself in there, so far as I'm aware of. Although I might be barking up the wrong tree with that.

Exactly right. by Neshomeh on 2009-01-29 19:40:00 UTC Reply

There's actually little to no quoting of the original badfic in the Original Series, if I remember right. Mostly they just paraphrase what happens in the badfic in such a way as to highlight how ridiculous it is. The humorous paraphrase is a skill I'm working on in my own missions.

~Neshomeh, possibly one of the least prolific writers around as compared to others who have been around about as long.

Re: Exactly right. by Pads on 2009-01-29 22:33:00 UTC Reply

Ah, the paraphrases. Always a good thing. And we certainly need a lot of 'em in Bad Slash, else our readership would be limited to about three people. But occasionally one comes across a line that just needs to be quoted in its entirety, for the WTF points.

Not a PG either, but... by Sedri on 2009-01-28 22:58:00 UTC Reply

How long have you been here? I'm afraid I don't recognise you - this may, of course, be a fault of my memory, but you don't seem to have been very actively involved in the Board - I found your name on only about four posts on the front page. The idea of a month-long wait before asking Permission, you know, is so that the PGs can see you've taken active part in our community.

On the other hand, maybe I'm just blind.

Not a PG but... by Crystal on 2009-01-28 22:51:00 UTC Reply

Whoot more 40K agents!
I can't seem to access your writing sample though, it wants me to join Deviantart.net first!

You will need to join... by Zotz on 2009-01-28 23:10:00 UTC Reply

You can join for free, though. You will probably need to say you are over 18, though, since I had to label the mission as having Explicit Content. The badfic that I sporked was basically a Warhammer 40K rapefic. Hope I have answered any questions you have...