Know nothing of the fandom but the name, but that's okay. Still much fun!

It was good, they always are : )

I wasn't even bothered by the centering. That was an interesting twist when Kat pointed it out. *g*

Also, I like the way you handled the first person part. Now I'm trying to imagine how my agents would react under similar circumstances. *snicker*

~Neshomeh

I had no clue about a lot of the canonical elements but you made this fun to read nonetheless, so as far as I'm concered you've done a great job :).

I haven't the foggiest what the continuum even is, let alone anything about it, but that was nonetheless very enjoyable, and all made sense.

Spotted one tiny punctuation mistake: "“Jade’s not ‘old-looking,’ if the official data ..." - that comma after old-looking should be after the quotation mark too.

The centre-justification was a nice touch, and excellent use of agent-stuck-in-first-person.

Oh, and if you want to finish three or four missions at once, the trick is to find really short, really horrible ones. The more horrible the better, because ideally you want "so bad you can only write a sentence at a time before running off to a different mission". Thus you get to write many at once, although admittedly the downside is severe brain breakage.

The thing about a good PPC mission is that you can enjoy it without knowing the canon. What's an Oracle Knight? Where's Malkuth? What do ligers have to do with this fandom? I haven't the faintest idea, but it's still fun to read. So good mission. Very enjoyable.

I need more synonyms.

hS

Shiny new mission :3