Subject: Re: I'm seeing a pattern. ^_^
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Posted on: 2009-01-28 16:05:00 UTC
And I just like going through other people's stuff with a red pen. It's a dreadful habit, I know. But yes, I'll happily beta anything you've got. Don't count on the free time lasting though - I graduate in four and a half months.
So yeah.
It's funny, there'll be none for weeks and all of a sudden three or four finished at once. People in general, not me by myself, 'cause wow, I'd have to have a lot more spare time on my hands.
Behold.
I do realize probably a grand total of two people that hang around will know the fandom. But that's okay. Really.
Know nothing of the fandom but the name, but that's okay. Still much fun!
It was good, they always are : )
I wasn't even bothered by the centering. That was an interesting twist when Kat pointed it out. *g*
Also, I like the way you handled the first person part. Now I'm trying to imagine how my agents would react under similar circumstances. *snicker*
~Neshomeh
I had no clue about a lot of the canonical elements but you made this fun to read nonetheless, so as far as I'm concered you've done a great job :).
I haven't the foggiest what the continuum even is, let alone anything about it, but that was nonetheless very enjoyable, and all made sense.
Spotted one tiny punctuation mistake: "“Jade’s not ‘old-looking,’ if the official data ..." - that comma after old-looking should be after the quotation mark too.
The centre-justification was a nice touch, and excellent use of agent-stuck-in-first-person.
Oh, and if you want to finish three or four missions at once, the trick is to find really short, really horrible ones. The more horrible the better, because ideally you want "so bad you can only write a sentence at a time before running off to a different mission". Thus you get to write many at once, although admittedly the downside is severe brain breakage.
I just like tucking punctuation inside quotes.
Seriously though, maybe I should just get you to beta for punctuation in your no doubt copious free time. =P
Brain breakage could be a problem.
And good thing it made sense. Heh, I'd be a lot more worried if it didn't. Thanks. =)
And I just like going through other people's stuff with a red pen. It's a dreadful habit, I know. But yes, I'll happily beta anything you've got. Don't count on the free time lasting though - I graduate in four and a half months.
The thing about a good PPC mission is that you can enjoy it without knowing the canon. What's an Oracle Knight? Where's Malkuth? What do ligers have to do with this fandom? I haven't the faintest idea, but it's still fun to read. So good mission. Very enjoyable.
I need more synonyms.
hS
*shot*
Yeah.
Ligers are not the traditional earth ligers. >.>
Here's a picture. The beastie in the cage -- not the girl -- that's a ToA liger. Cute, no? =P
Shiny new mission :3
