Subject: That's right.
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Posted on: 2009-01-06 20:14:00 UTC
Yep, she's not from anything officially published. Cham isn't a canon either, so that was a bit of a writing fumble on my part in not making it clear enough.
Anyway, sorry for the Flower slip, I wasn't entirely sure how to go about writing one of them. I did try read up on the Kdzu though. [/excuse making]
As to your other question; sure, go ahead! I don't mind at all. ^^
My agents: http://responsecentre32f.webs.com/theagents.htm
My sample: http://responsecentre32f.webs.com/sampleanewpatient.htm
The fic I'm levelling my sights at: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4614344/1/ItsMyLife
That's about it I think. *smiles*
She's from a role-play based on Battle Royale, but she's not, in fact, a character from any officially published work? I just want to make sure I understand it right. If you frequently have a temptation to lift minor characters from canon works (Agent Cham?), I'm going to tell you right now to get over it.
The writing sample could use a little bit of work, but it's nothing a beta wouldn't catch: a few commas where there should be periods and a few places where it wasn't clear who was supposed to be speaking. Also, please avoid interrobangs. They tend to be more annoying than anything else, and I'm pretty sure none of the Flowers would ever indulge in them. Other than that, I enjoyed it. {= )
Pending your response, this is a tentative Permission Granted.
Taking off my PG Hat now: mind if I borrow Nurse Barker for a story set around the Invasion? He seems entertaining. *g* (Your response to this particular question will not affect your status vis a vis Permission.)
~Neshomeh
Yep, she's not from anything officially published. Cham isn't a canon either, so that was a bit of a writing fumble on my part in not making it clear enough.
Anyway, sorry for the Flower slip, I wasn't entirely sure how to go about writing one of them. I did try read up on the Kdzu though. [/excuse making]
As to your other question; sure, go ahead! I don't mind at all. ^^
Just be sure to use a beta. {= )
And, thanks!
~Neshomeh