Subject: Re: Paging the DBS!
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Posted on: 2008-08-17 07:46:00 UTC
hi guys i am young boy like you i have free candy and yummies at my house pls come and get free candy like haloooweenie and you wil be very happy go to red van by house with scratching FREE CANDY and eat candy and have yummy yummy feeling then sleep at my house and lets HAVE FUNNY FUN and CANDY pls come i am young boy lonely 11 male lonely
There is no excuse for this atrocity! (It's AFF, in case you're accessing it from work/a public place.) 15 reviews, and an average vote of 5 stars from 18 votes.
A Shattered Mind by German Kitsune Witch Jimaine.
Abarai Renji worked as hard as he could to leave Inuzuri. He wanted to escape from the pain and the hunger but most of all from being raped as a small child. Now as a man he is forced into that situation again by his Captain Kuchiki Byakuya N/C, Lemon
Do I even need to mention the fact that they've forgotten the OOC tag that is definitely necessary for this 'fic'?
hi guys i am young boy like you i have free candy and yummies at my house pls come and get free candy like haloooweenie and you wil be very happy go to red van by house with scratching FREE CANDY and eat candy and have yummy yummy feeling then sleep at my house and lets HAVE FUNNY FUN and CANDY pls come i am young boy lonely 11 male lonely
Weren't all these supposed to be deleted?
I'm usually one of the people going, "Ooh, badfic, let's see just how painful it is."
...this is so way over my head. I agree with Skid; I am actually frightened of reading this story. After all, it appears that the person writing it not only has good grammar and spelling, but is doing it in all seriousness.
...and wait, average of 5 stars? Out of... 5? *shudder*
I'm going to hide under the table now, 'kay? To those agents who might be brave enough to read through and attack this fic... good luck.
I'm actually afraid to read this. I just got into Bleach and I don't want it to be ruined forever.