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Subject: Gah, badfics (NWS, NBS)
Author: Ansela
Posted on: 2008-08-09 14:15:00 UTC

Please, someone, anyone, take these and deal with them!

The Dying Flame by AkatsukiVampiress
Alone in his home one night, as Roy Mustang recalls horrid memories of Ishball, Hughes' death, and much more bloodshed, he decides to ease his pain with something that could end up worse than he thought.

The Department of Angst might want to take a look at emo!alcoholic!Roy.

Helpless Torment by AkatsukiVampiress
All my life knowing Ryuken, my father, I never thought he'd stoop this low. I knew he despised the Quincy race, but why would he do this? Was this an expression of his hatred? [UryuRyuuken] [Incest] [RAPE]

I believe that summary speaks for itself. ISHIDA RYUKEN IS NOT A GLAURUNGING RAPIST!! ISHIDA URYU WOULD NOT SUBMIT WITHOUT A MASSIVE FIGHT!!

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Gah, badfics (NWS, NBS) by Ansela on 2008-08-09 14:15:00 UTC

as it happens, the Dept. of Angst ... by The Trojanhorse on 2008-08-09 21:47:00 UTC Reply

...IS looking for another mission ... but they (read I) don't know the continuum. Any volunteers to help out and cowrite?

I might be able to help... by Ansela on 2008-08-09 23:28:00 UTC Reply

I'm still trying to figure out all of the canon failure present in that fic.

So far I've counted two mini-Chimeras (Alicia and Isball), three if you count 'state alchemist' which should be capitalised, severe urpleness of prose, implying that Hughes was a State Alchemist, implying that Mustang was in the Investigations Department with Hughes, implying that Mustang didn't kill himself during the Ishvalan War because of honour (he would have done it if Marcoh hadn't intervened), making Mustang suicidal about Hughes' death, killing him in an extremely pathetic manner and making Mustang drink an impossible amount of alcohol without passing out or throwing up.

Is that of any use to you?

yep, lots of help by The Trojanhorse on 2008-08-09 23:40:00 UTC Reply

I shall investigate the fic forthwith with the intention of giving it to Lasa and Montbretia to tackle.

Re: yep, lots of help by Ansela on 2008-08-10 00:02:00 UTC Reply

Also, it seems to be anime-verse rather than manga-verse, since there is a mention of Mustang killing doctors in the Ishvalan War, which he only did in the anime.

well, the DOA is taking it on... by The Trojanhorse on 2008-08-10 09:58:00 UTC Reply

...but can I pester you about the details, given I dunno the canon?

Pretty please?

Sure by Ansela on 2008-08-10 11:14:00 UTC Reply

You know my e-mail and my LJ name, don't you?

yep. W00t. (nm) by The Trojanhorse on 2008-08-10 23:02:00 UTC Reply