I'm still trying to figure out all of the canon failure present in that fic.

So far I've counted two mini-Chimeras (Alicia and Isball), three if you count 'state alchemist' which should be capitalised, severe urpleness of prose, implying that Hughes was a State Alchemist, implying that Mustang was in the Investigations Department with Hughes, implying that Mustang didn't kill himself during the Ishvalan War because of honour (he would have done it if Marcoh hadn't intervened), making Mustang suicidal about Hughes' death, killing him in an extremely pathetic manner and making Mustang drink an impossible amount of alcohol without passing out or throwing up.

Is that of any use to you?