Redwall fic which possibly needs looking at ... - PPC Posting Board

Subject: Redwall fic which possibly needs looking at ...
Author: Laburnum
Posted on: 2008-08-08 02:17:00 UTC

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4382427/1/BlueStar

When the disclaimer reads "I do not own Redwall, Deptford, or any other thing I make up that may be in this fic", emphasis mine, you know it's going to be confusing.

If self-pluggery is okay, I've done a hopefully better-handled fic: <a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4372861/1/VeiledinDeceit">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4372861/1/Veiledin_Deceit
Should warn you it's rated R. Full warnings inside. Read the notes at the end before reviewing, please.

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Redwall fic which possibly needs looking at ... by Laburnum on 2008-08-08 02:17:00 UTC

Nice. by Sara on 2008-08-09 03:13:00 UTC Reply

I absolutely loved yours. As Trojie said, you really made Bluefen into a vermin girl. Fantastically done!

As for the other...kill it. It's confusing. DX

I would, but I don't have a clue what's going on in it. by Laburnum on 2008-08-09 11:55:00 UTC Reply

You're right, it is confusing, to the extent that I can't remember which character is which. I hate that.

Duuuuuuuuude by The Trojanhorse on 2008-08-08 03:20:00 UTC Reply

Yours was awesomesauce; I would have left a review only ff.net appears to have locked me out. Srsly. Awesome, and realistic. It makes sense. You made Bluefen a real vermin girl :)

As for the badfic, I read a couple of chapters and had to give up. It's heinous.

*squee* Thankee! by Laburnum on 2008-08-08 03:29:00 UTC Reply

Now I kind of have to write that Look-It-Doesn't-Have-To-Be-Eyeburning lemon for you, since you say you like my work ... how have I got myself into a life where I spend my time effectively writing disturbing stuff on dares?

yes, dooo iiiiiiiit! by The Trojanhorse on 2008-08-08 03:31:00 UTC Reply

I want to read it! We both know it can work.

Don't worry, I've got to that stage myself. I just posted a fic about Caspian and Edmund getting locked in a room ... because I said I'd never do it and then someone said 'doo iiiit' and ... I'm hopeless.

*waits eagerly for fic*

Still think I should practice with human OCs. by Laburnum on 2008-08-08 03:38:00 UTC Reply

Jumping in at the deep end with furry porn based on children's books may not be the way to go. Rule Thirty-Four requires practice to do properly.

probably by The Trojanhorse on 2008-08-08 04:04:00 UTC Reply

it's always good to start off with the anatomy you know best :P

I also really want to do ... by Laburnum on 2008-08-08 13:52:00 UTC Reply

... a fsndom-appropriate tribute to this: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/953329/1/MaryMordorSue

Okay, Mossflower's vermin don't have a One Ring and I'd have to think of another reason for the victim to be there other than chasing Aragorn, but the basic idea could be fun.