Subject: probably
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Posted on: 2008-08-08 04:04:00 UTC
it's always good to start off with the anatomy you know best :P
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Redwall fic which possibly needs looking at ... by
on 2008-08-08 02:17:00 UTC
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4382427/1/BlueStar
When the disclaimer reads "I do not own Redwall, Deptford, or any other thing I make up that may be in this fic", emphasis mine, you know it's going to be confusing.
If self-pluggery is okay, I've done a hopefully better-handled fic: <a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4372861/1/VeiledinDeceit">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4372861/1/Veiledin_Deceit
Should warn you it's rated R. Full warnings inside. Read the notes at the end before reviewing, please. -
Nice. by
on 2008-08-09 03:13:00 UTC
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I absolutely loved yours. As Trojie said, you really made Bluefen into a vermin girl. Fantastically done!
As for the other...kill it. It's confusing. DX -
I would, but I don't have a clue what's going on in it. by
on 2008-08-09 11:55:00 UTC
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You're right, it is confusing, to the extent that I can't remember which character is which. I hate that.
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Duuuuuuuuude by
on 2008-08-08 03:20:00 UTC
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Yours was awesomesauce; I would have left a review only ff.net appears to have locked me out. Srsly. Awesome, and realistic. It makes sense. You made Bluefen a real vermin girl :)
As for the badfic, I read a couple of chapters and had to give up. It's heinous. -
*squee* Thankee! by
on 2008-08-08 03:29:00 UTC
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Now I kind of have to write that Look-It-Doesn't-Have-To-Be-Eyeburning lemon for you, since you say you like my work ... how have I got myself into a life where I spend my time effectively writing disturbing stuff on dares?
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yes, dooo iiiiiiiit! by
on 2008-08-08 03:31:00 UTC
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I want to read it! We both know it can work.
Don't worry, I've got to that stage myself. I just posted a fic about Caspian and Edmund getting locked in a room ... because I said I'd never do it and then someone said 'doo iiiit' and ... I'm hopeless.
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Still think I should practice with human OCs. by
on 2008-08-08 03:38:00 UTC
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Jumping in at the deep end with furry porn based on children's books may not be the way to go. Rule Thirty-Four requires practice to do properly.
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probably by
on 2008-08-08 04:04:00 UTC
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it's always good to start off with the anatomy you know best :P
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I also really want to do ... by
on 2008-08-08 13:52:00 UTC
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... a fsndom-appropriate tribute to this: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/953329/1/MaryMordorSue
Okay, Mossflower's vermin don't have a One Ring and I'd have to think of another reason for the victim to be there other than chasing Aragorn, but the basic idea could be fun.