It's sort of...entertaining? by
MSpencer
on 2008-07-18 01:11:00 UTC
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I've read plenty of good fiction as well as A LOT of bad fiction, and while this is terrible, it's terrible in a sort of "so god awful I couldn't help but be entertained" way.
That's not to say the writer shouldn't still be tied to a mast and flogged for writing it.
*twitchy* Augh. by
JulyFlame
on 2008-07-17 00:22:00 UTC
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The first sentence is just OMGWTFO.o;;.
*wibble* by
Neshomeh
on 2008-07-17 00:15:00 UTC
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There are certain things that make for bad inspiration. Dreams are usually on that list. This would be another thing.
I'm just glad it doesn't seem to have anything to do with PotO. Though I only looked at the first chapter.
~Neshomeh, scared to go further.
*sigh* Possibly by
Sedri
on 2008-07-16 23:42:00 UTC
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Why is it that they can make the author's notes look halfway decent, upping our hopes, only to dash them with the first lines of the story?