Subject: And all was right with Hyrule.
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Posted on: 2014-08-12 02:58:00 UTC

(At least for a little while.) You're a pretty good writer; the only real flaw I noticed is that you tend to go for long stretches without a pause (comma, semicolon, et cetera). That lack of punctuation makes your story look unfinished.

Thanks for the scented candles. What's the overall theme here? Fruits? Wildflowers? Incense? (Also, hello, possible newbie! Your gift is a Blue Purse of Holding!)

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