Subject: Thanks
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Posted on: 2014-08-12 05:36:00 UTC
As experienced as I am even I can forget those basic rules now and again, thank you for pointing them out to me! I'll be more aware in the future. ;3
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The Trial of Jenna Silverblade by
on 2014-08-12 00:14:00 UTC
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To those Zelda fans who have heard of or sporked this infamously bad Sue fic I present this fic for you, so peeved off as I was at this story that I decided to write this.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10592823/1/The-Trial-of-Jenna-Silverblade
As a gift to the PPC I present my own line of soul soothing scented Mary Sue Cleansing candles, for sporkers and agents in need of mental healing from the toxic effects of prolonged Sue exposure. I hope they can be of assistance. -
And good riddance! (nm) by
on 2014-08-12 23:37:00 UTC
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Was wondering when she would recieve punishment. by
on 2014-08-12 07:39:00 UTC
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It is good to finally see Jenna brought to justice finally. I may be slightly biased about anything that puts Jenna in her place though. Although that does remind me that under PPC standards the fic is still out there waiting to be killed.
Since it is semi-related to this would it be at all possible that I claim My Inner Life for a possible ( yet long into the future) mission? I must admit that it would be quite interesting if I was the one to finally end Jenna Silverblade for the PPC considering it was me lurking around the Tv Tropes page for the fic that lead me here. -
And all was right with Hyrule. by
on 2014-08-12 02:58:00 UTC
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(At least for a little while.) You're a pretty good writer; the only real flaw I noticed is that you tend to go for long stretches without a pause (comma, semicolon, et cetera). That lack of punctuation makes your story look unfinished.
Thanks for the scented candles. What's the overall theme here? Fruits? Wildflowers? Incense? (Also, hello, possible newbie! Your gift is a Blue Purse of Holding!)