This mission is about ready for the peatmoss stage. That's when I ignore it for a month unless I have an inspiration involving it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rrWXSxcKdjKIXW7xOpM0OXEfM7bucpiS5XJYhfXHg/edit?usp=sharing

If someone could please give it a loose rundown for problems while it's fermenting?

Some specific things I'm wondering about...

Should I include the verbose intel report at all since I'm skipping so much as "meh"? Should the report go at the end? Should the incomplete version of the intel report stay that way, since that's where the agents are killing it? (Basically those three chapters are the cancer of a passable 20-chapter story.) Or should I have it continue, possibly with a spy-switch.

For the mission itself... I don't think the fried chicken incident was too bad, neither is the ice-cream parlor bit that I skipped. Should I explore these deeper?