Subject: Re: Looking for Feedback on Agent Concept
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Posted on: 2014-07-17 12:40:00 UTC

Figured I'd add a writing sample, to give anyone reading more of an idea of the kind of things I have in mind.

Unfortunately for Aaron, the Laws of Narrative Comedy had a better sense of canon than the fic itself did. As he activated the MMD, his footing slipped and he turned slightly. Before he had time realize what was happening, he was flipped over, banging his head painfully against the ground, and end up dangling upside down. "What the hell?" he cried, trying to right himself. "That's not supposed to be possible! I specifically remember them saying that's not supposed to be possible!"

Natasha's lips quirked as she tried to suppress a laugh. "It's not possible with the training harnesses. On the other hand, if you manage to wrap the cable around your leg, it's pretty much guaranteed."

Aaron groaned. "Why do I only get the crappy parts of almost being a canon character?" he asked the world at large.

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