Subject: Thanks!
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Posted on: 2014-05-25 19:28:00 UTC

That's definitely better, though I'm still not sure how even bumbling recruits fail to recognize that Sued!Silver isn't the same Sue they've been following. You also missed some paragraph, dialogue, title, and asterisk corrections.

Fortunately, none of the above are problems that would go unsolved with the aid of a competent beta-reader, so I'm prepared to say Permission Granted! Use it wisely. Permission and a beta-reader. Use them both wisely. {; )

I still don't get the RC number, though. What are you going for with that? Is it a math joke? Computer joke? Printing joke? In-joke...? Or did you just really want the number 19 even though it's already taken, in which case, what about 0.19, 119, 219, 319, ..., 1919, etc.? Those are all free as far as the List of RCs knows. I mean, keep 19(LanguageNotRecognized) or 19~Pie if you've got an actual reason for it, but if it's just complication for complication's sake, I strongly recommend against it.

~Neshomeh

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