Subject: I guess.
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Posted on: 2014-05-13 17:14:00 UTC

But that doesn't mean I should attempt a flashy parkour routine when I can't run more than a few steps.

I am known there for being mean. Here is the review I posted.

"This needs formatting. And a few other things that will make it into a properly-written story instead of the transcript of explaining an idea. Read a real published book and pay attention to how it was written."

I suppose I could spork it, but I'm not sure which of my agents has the mental fortitude to comment on what is happening and which would be screaming for it to end. Is there an Nth dimensional being or eldritch abomination I could borrow?

I did tease out some lovely imagery like "something in him told him to rome the night so he did" and "you are the last of a dyeing group."

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