Subject: Absolutely love "Ephemerals!"
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Posted on: 2014-05-02 14:43:00 UTC

I had seen the Wrecked Music Department piece before. I'm not really a fan of the concept, since it doesn't seem like the PPC ever would have bothered doing something like this. (Also, this one mission we see seems more like Plagiarism's purview.)

I like that the DCH finally gets some screen time, and that you used the opportunity to show how Mylissa went insane, as mentioned in her one other appearance. Still, it's a little hard to imagine how a mission would go for any duck other than Mylissa, since they all seem to reinforce the same type of humor they would ostensibly be fighting against.

The DRS, I actually really like conceptually, because it would be an opportunity to do . . . shall we say, "toned down" romance fics, without all the icky stuff? I might try looking for a mission that would work in this style for my floaters. I am curious to know why this department had a flower as an agent; it would be the only Flower still going on active duty in the worlds after the Organisation expanded, yeah?

Godplayers is the one department I feel probably could have remained as its own department, but there's not much we can do about so few people having written in it. I'm glad it lived on as a division.

Willful Ignorance is my favorite of the ones presented by you here. (It is "willful," right? Or is "wilful" an accepted spelling in English English?) I love the technology you made here, and if you don't object, I would love to give it a spin with my floaters someday. There's a huge amount of potential, both to let the first person'd agent show off what they know about canon, and almost "write" things back to the way they should be in their mind, but also have the tech go haywire and create further complications.

All in all, some excellent and imaginative ideas here!

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