I'll help, but...

Still asking for a beta. by Seychelles on 2014-03-09 03:43:00 UTC Reply

But this time I have an address. Copy and paste
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10137968/1/Order-of-Order-How-it-began
Please tell me what you think. I really want to make this story the best, it can possibly be.It is a mega crossover between Tiger&Bunny, Thundercats 2011, Soul Eater, D.Grayman, Bleach, One Piece, Fairy Tail, and Fullmetal Alchemist. Possibly part of of a trilogy.

Hijacking thread! by Desdendelle on 2014-03-09 23:42:00 UTC Reply

About time I finished what was on my plate, I think. I've finished writing a mission, and I need a beta. Knowledge of Forgotten Realms would be nice but isn't required; I mainly need SPaG, flow and general goofiness checked. Any takers, post your e-mail (or send something to sur DOT nhm AT gmail DOT com) so I'll be able to share the GDoc with you.

I can help by Antigone68104 on 2014-03-10 19:28:00 UTC Reply

It's been a while since I last gamed in Forgotten Realms, but I don't think they've changed too much. LLWatts AT juno DOT com.

GDerp shared. (nm) by Desdendelle on 2014-03-10 21:59:00 UTC Reply

I'll help, but... by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-09 04:24:00 UTC Reply

I'd suggest that you find another beta as well. I've been watching the Tiger and Bunny anime, and I've seen the 2011 ThunderCats, so I can help with those fandoms. I also know a little about One Piece, Bleach, and Fullmetal Alchemist, so I shouldn't be completely lost.

However, I would suggest deleting the fic for now; it is usually best to get your chapters betaed, THEN post them up.

Do you use Google Drive? If not, we can communicate by e-mail. My username has a link to my email address.

To be fair by Seychelles on 2014-03-09 12:26:00 UTC Reply

I did a lot of editing before I posted it up online. My computer has spellcheck, so my work isn't riddled with mistakes. Also I have had a fight with the chapter update system, and I don't want to go through that again. I just want someone to tell me what they think in the story department.

Re: To be fair by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-12 02:25:00 UTC Reply

I've finished reading Chapter 1. For future reference, please know that merely using spell check does not mean that it isn't riddled with mistakes. It just isn't riddled with spelling errors.

Sorry by Seychelles on 2014-03-12 16:30:00 UTC Reply

I do really want to write a decent story. However it took me a long time to get an account and even longer to figure out how to update my story. I respect your ideas, but don't want to have to go through it all again

I understand your hesitation, by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-12 18:07:00 UTC Reply

but since you've been through the hassle, it should be a lot easier this time--and with the errors that I've spotted, at least an edit is in order. And don't forget: I also am working on a story on FFN, so if you have any questions on how to update chapters on the site, feel free to ask me.

One more thing: Now that we have each other's e-mail addresses, let's continue this conversation by e-mail if needs be; I would not like to clutter up the Board with personal conversation.

One last question by Seychelles on 2014-03-13 16:23:00 UTC Reply

What is the story your working on and can I check it out?

I'm working on by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-13 16:41:00 UTC Reply

a crossover between Pokemon and Bakugan: Battle Brawlers. Here is the URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9697398/1/The-Vexos-Chronicles-Part-I-Lost-Luster

That sounds reasonable. by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-10 00:20:00 UTC Reply

What is your e-mail address? I'm pretty certain that you don't want me offering what will be a considerable amount of opinions on the Board.

About that... by Seychelles on 2014-03-10 04:17:00 UTC Reply

I tried to use the link in you username to try and email you but it didn't work. I am also clueless about google drive. The board will have to do until we can find a better option. For my fic I'm a little bit scared that I have written Lion-O to much like Barnby. ( Who won't formally appear until part two).

Odd... by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-10 14:41:00 UTC Reply

Well, here is my e-mail address: sonofheaven176[at]gmail.com
Please try e-mailing me again.

Sent fic by Seychelles on 2014-03-11 01:46:00 UTC Reply

Crossing your fingers and hope it works.

Didn't get it. by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-11 03:19:00 UTC Reply

Did you make sure to replace the [at] with the @ symbol?
And did you make sure that it's all one word? It's sonofheaven176: no underscores.

You sure? by Seychelles on 2014-03-11 04:36:00 UTC Reply

My email is bleachpirate ( at) shaw.ca

Unfortunately, yes. by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-11 14:31:00 UTC Reply

It isn't even in my spam folder. I sent you an e-mail this time. I hope that this finally ends this game of phone tag (or should I say "e-mail tag")?

Tag is over by Seychelles on 2014-03-11 23:16:00 UTC Reply

I Got your message, lets hope you get mine in return

Re: Tag is over by son_of_heaven176 on 2014-03-12 00:53:00 UTC Reply

Yes, I got it.