Subject: I'm working on
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Posted on: 2014-03-13 16:41:00 UTC
a crossover between Pokemon and Bakugan: Battle Brawlers. Here is the URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9697398/1/The-Vexos-Chronicles-Part-I-Lost-Luster
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Still asking for a beta. by
on 2014-03-09 03:43:00 UTC
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But this time I have an address. Copy and paste
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10137968/1/Order-of-Order-How-it-began
Please tell me what you think. I really want to make this story the best, it can possibly be.It is a mega crossover between Tiger&Bunny, Thundercats 2011, Soul Eater, D.Grayman, Bleach, One Piece, Fairy Tail, and Fullmetal Alchemist. Possibly part of of a trilogy. -
Hijacking thread! by
on 2014-03-09 23:42:00 UTC
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About time I finished what was on my plate, I think. I've finished writing a mission, and I need a beta. Knowledge of Forgotten Realms would be nice but isn't required; I mainly need SPaG, flow and general goofiness checked. Any takers, post your e-mail (or send something to sur DOT nhm AT gmail DOT com) so I'll be able to share the GDoc with you.
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I can help by
on 2014-03-10 19:28:00 UTC
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It's been a while since I last gamed in Forgotten Realms, but I don't think they've changed too much. LLWatts AT juno DOT com.
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GDerp shared. (nm) by
on 2014-03-10 21:59:00 UTC
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I'll help, but... by
on 2014-03-09 04:24:00 UTC
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I'd suggest that you find another beta as well. I've been watching the Tiger and Bunny anime, and I've seen the 2011 ThunderCats, so I can help with those fandoms. I also know a little about One Piece, Bleach, and Fullmetal Alchemist, so I shouldn't be completely lost.
However, I would suggest deleting the fic for now; it is usually best to get your chapters betaed, THEN post them up.
Do you use Google Drive? If not, we can communicate by e-mail. My username has a link to my email address. -
To be fair by
on 2014-03-09 12:26:00 UTC
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I did a lot of editing before I posted it up online. My computer has spellcheck, so my work isn't riddled with mistakes. Also I have had a fight with the chapter update system, and I don't want to go through that again. I just want someone to tell me what they think in the story department.
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Re: To be fair by
on 2014-03-12 02:25:00 UTC
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I've finished reading Chapter 1. For future reference, please know that merely using spell check does not mean that it isn't riddled with mistakes. It just isn't riddled with spelling errors.
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Sorry by
on 2014-03-12 16:30:00 UTC
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I do really want to write a decent story. However it took me a long time to get an account and even longer to figure out how to update my story. I respect your ideas, but don't want to have to go through it all again
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I understand your hesitation, by
on 2014-03-12 18:07:00 UTC
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but since you've been through the hassle, it should be a lot easier this time--and with the errors that I've spotted, at least an edit is in order. And don't forget: I also am working on a story on FFN, so if you have any questions on how to update chapters on the site, feel free to ask me.
One more thing: Now that we have each other's e-mail addresses, let's continue this conversation by e-mail if needs be; I would not like to clutter up the Board with personal conversation. -
One last question by
on 2014-03-13 16:23:00 UTC
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What is the story your working on and can I check it out?
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I'm working on by
on 2014-03-13 16:41:00 UTC
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a crossover between Pokemon and Bakugan: Battle Brawlers. Here is the URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9697398/1/The-Vexos-Chronicles-Part-I-Lost-Luster
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That sounds reasonable. by
on 2014-03-10 00:20:00 UTC
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What is your e-mail address? I'm pretty certain that you don't want me offering what will be a considerable amount of opinions on the Board.
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About that... by
on 2014-03-10 04:17:00 UTC
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I tried to use the link in you username to try and email you but it didn't work. I am also clueless about google drive. The board will have to do until we can find a better option. For my fic I'm a little bit scared that I have written Lion-O to much like Barnby. ( Who won't formally appear until part two).
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Odd... by
on 2014-03-10 14:41:00 UTC
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Well, here is my e-mail address: sonofheaven176[at]gmail.com
Please try e-mailing me again. -
Sent fic by
on 2014-03-11 01:46:00 UTC
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Crossing your fingers and hope it works.
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Didn't get it. by
on 2014-03-11 03:19:00 UTC
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Did you make sure to replace the [at] with the @ symbol?
And did you make sure that it's all one word? It's sonofheaven176: no underscores. -
You sure? by
on 2014-03-11 04:36:00 UTC
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My email is bleachpirate ( at) shaw.ca
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Unfortunately, yes. by
on 2014-03-11 14:31:00 UTC
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It isn't even in my spam folder. I sent you an e-mail this time. I hope that this finally ends this game of phone tag (or should I say "e-mail tag")?
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Tag is over by
on 2014-03-11 23:16:00 UTC
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I Got your message, lets hope you get mine in return
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Re: Tag is over by
on 2014-03-12 00:53:00 UTC
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Yes, I got it.