Well, I read further...and it's just not making me all that angry, to be honest. The first chapter did--it seemed like pure theft of Jack's storyline--but afterwards...I mean, it's not all that good (apart from the SPaG, which is either perfectly fine or just lacking anything too glaring), but--I don't particularly want to set fire to it? I mean, it's filled with annoyances--Isolda Frost, for instance, certainly looks a lot like Jack Frost, and shares part of his name with no explanation to boot, and the unmarked POV shift I just saw was pretty jarring--but...it's not particularly filling me with rage. Not like some others I've seen. If you want to take it down so badly (and I assume you're made angrier by it than I am), I'm happy to potentially co-write with you; alternatively, you can find someone else--there are definitely other Rise of the Guardians fans around here--or just wait until you have permission. Your call.

And yeah, co-writing with one permission-less partner is a thing. See this section of the Permission FAQ article on the wiki for details.

~DF

PS: As an analysis--I've finished reading it, and, well, the good thing is that you've got some interesting concepts in there, and some cool story ideas (as well as generally good spelling and grammar, as I mentioned earlier). The main issues are the constant POV shifts, the cliches and imitations/ripoffs in some of the characters and backstories, and the fact that it's supposedly a movieverse fic but seems to be using what I assume are the book names. As well, it's missing a disclaimer, which FFN fics are supposed to have. Those are the main things I'm seeing; the rest are more minor nitpicks. In short, it's not the worst of the worst--but it's pretty far from the best of the best. I think I probably wouldn't take it on on my own, as I don't think there's much to make my agents angry or to use to make a good story for them, but if you've come up with agents who would be angry at it (or something along those lines), then I'm fairly sure an agent or two of mine would be able to grow a bit by being a sort of amused tag-along. At the very least, I'd be able to write them as semi-relaxed/slowly gaining tension for a change. But yeah--your call. And keep in mind that other people have seen Rise of the Guardians, and may see more mission potential for their agents in this than I do.

(I'm lying. I don't actually own a walking stick. But I used to, and it did: a big greenish metallic marble.)

But yeah, there's that, too. Most things don't make me angry anymore, and if they do, I don't even necessarily want to deal with them, because being angry is no fun. I actually had a problem for the longest time where I was afraid to PPC in LotR, both for that reason and because I wasn't sure I could do it justice, not having done all the background reading like it seemed everyone else here had. ^_^;

Anyway, I tend to look for things that make me laugh at the ridiculousness. Most of "Ring Child" and "Blood Raining Night" fall into this category (except where they overstep right into disturbing and/or offensive). It's the specific word choices or faults in the logic that make funny mistakes happen, though, not the broad flaws. It's not just that Aragorn, Elrond, and Gandalf are OOC; it's that these wise and noble heroes are all cooing over some doe-eyed childthing and dandling it on their knees like little old ladies. It's not just that there are SPaG problems; it's that putting an h in the word "sitting" makes another real word that has the same function in the sentence, but an entirely different outcome. I require absurd mental images in my sporking material. (It may be telling that the only fic I claim scarred me for life was due to gross and persistent misuse of the word "as" rather than any content issues. It still hurts my brain.)

Also, anything I choose to spork has to make a good story for my characters. If it's not going to push their particular buttons, there's no point in writing about it, because it will be boring.

~Neshomeh