Subject: On Creative (and not so creative) Curses
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Posted on: 2014-01-10 14:22:00 UTC

I read an article today about the use of the f-word in modern culture (which you too can read here -- don't worry, it's censored). That, combined with a note from one of my betas in my last story about how nice it was to see agents use real-life curses, got me thinking about how the PPC approaches the concept of 'mature language.'

Whenever I see someone use 'Flaming Denethor' or 'Radagast on a bunny sled' in a mission, I always have to pause and think about the usage for a moment. Is the character saying this because it's something that the character would actually say, or is it for some other reason? Maybe the author doesn't like swearing. Maybe they just think the phrase is funny. (It also makes me think the character is briefly channeling Hermes from Futurama: 'Sweet somethin' of some place!') Those aren't wrong or bad reasons to use creative curses, but it should be something you think about.

I've always been of the mindset that dialogue is an important tool in characterization. Does a character use formal or casual words? Do they use elements of a specific dialect, or even a few bits of a foreign language? Do they speak in a way that would be considered grammatically acceptable if written down? And most pertinent to this subject, do they swear? If so, how and in what situations? Is it something they save for the most dire of situations or are they like drunken sailors on shore leave?

Those who have read my stories might notice that my agents don't shy away from the occasional curse. Laura's probably the most regular offender, what with her being a hyperaggressive and hypercompetative gamer-type. However, because she's also a bit of nerd, she'll occasionally use referential substitutions in place of swear words: 'Jeebus' in place of 'Jesus,' for example.

On the flip side of that, Xericka has cursed maybe once (in her first mission, as I recall; I was still struggling with her character at that point). Swearing is obviously not apart of her character. That means that, if and when I do have Xericka drop an f-bomb, the audience will immediately know that the midden has hit the windmill.

But what does everyone else think? Do your characters swear, or do they stick strictly to self-bowdlerization? Why do they swear/not swear? Does swearing even have a place in the PPC? Am I just talking a load of tosh and nonsense? Color me curious.

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