Subject: Hmm...
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Posted on: 2014-01-10 19:09:00 UTC
Interesting questions! I agree with you that dialogue is a very important part of characterization, and when/how my characters swear (or don't) is something I put some thought into. How My Agents Swear:
1. Nume is both the most likely to swear and the most likely to use real-life curses. He's from World One (or perhaps a close relative where things like eidetic memories are both real and not utterly crippling), and he has an unwanted religious background, so most of the time he's happy blaspheming (Jesus Christ, god dammit, oh hell, etc.). He's also been known to say "frell," especially in my earlier missions, but nowadays I feel like substitutes like that are too coy for him. He escalates to s**t and f**k when things get serious.
2. Ilraen doesn't swear. He has a much less excitable, more pleasant demeanor than his partner, and he's extremely literal-minded. He understands idioms and figurative language most of the time now, and he can use them if he works at it, but they're never the first thing that comes to his mind.
3. Derik is from Pern, so he swears like a Pernese person. They don't have religion, and they're not bothered about sex, so most of their curses revolve around Thread and dragons. The most popular curse is either "shards" or "shells," both of which refer to damaged dragon eggs. There's also "scorch it," "by the First Egg / my dragon's egg," "crackdust," "shaffit," and, if you're being mild and don't mind sounding a bit silly, "fardles."
4. Gall is more likely to sling insults than to swear (she prefers to blame anything bad that happens to her on someone she can hit), and being from a family film based on kids' books, her language is probably rated PG-13 at worst, but she does use familiar swearwords. The HtTYD Vikings occasionally swear by the Norse gods in the film ("by Odin's beard" IIRC), so there's that, too.
5. Jenni's use of swearwords is the most eclectic. She doesn't use four-letter words much, if ever, but being a multiverse-traveler, she has picked up expressions from various continua. She's fond of the Pernese set and "frell" and its relatives, and it wouldn't be out of the question for her to drop a "Flaming Denethor!" She avoids religious language, but I think a generic "oh, god" or "what the hell" slips in every so often, and she does swear by the Powers That Be ("by the Powers," "sweet Powers," etc.). Whether she's referring to a particular set or simply any that might be listening probably depends on the circumstances. She might also use "son of a bitch!" and such, but it would have to be pretty serious for her to get insulting. The worst curse I can think of for her to say would be "a plague on it / plague it," and I don't think it's ever actually happened.
On a general note, one thing that drives me nuts about "creative" curses is when people just switch out "god" and switch in the local deity or equivalent, because it's not all that clever and it rarely makes sense. Nobody in Middle-earth would ever say "Oh my Eru," for instance; in Narnia they say "by the Lion's mane," not "Oh my Aslan." I can give it a pass if it's a fan doing it to show their fandom, but never a native of the continuum. Aside from such curses being non-canon, they bug me because they involve an assumption that other cultures would develop the exact same formula for cursing as us. Maybe in some cases they would, but there's no reason they should. It's something that should be considered carefully, not tossed in just because you think you need someone to swear.
~Neshomeh