...And I liked it. Alot.

Since I'm in a critique mood right now, I will give some criticism. I felt like the story repeated itself quite a bit, though that was tied into the message of the fic. Drill it into their heads and such. I also felt that the kids were slightly ooc, mostly in how they spoke, but it was not too bad.

That aside though, it was very well made, and I do not regret reading it. The Doctor's voice was perfect, and the way the fic tied the begining and end together was brilliant. The author has skill, I will say that much.